Police Report By PC Pickett
When we walked in something caught our eye.
A phone… There were 5 messages, we checked them and there was 3 from Scarlett
and 2 from other people who we assumed where the gang members. They said
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“Hi mum I am really sorry about our argument earlier
anyways I’m on my way now “
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“Mum HELP there are these people surrounding me
trying to kill me HELP.”
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“Mum I got away but they are now at grandmas and
I can’t find her I’m scared “
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“Hi, if you don’t deliver the stuff tonight I will
kill your family”
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“You have 20 minutes BE AWARE”
We couldn’t find the Mother in the house but we found a note
from her Mother to Little Scarlett saying
We assumed that This something was bad. After we looked
around we picked up a few things that we saw such as the Mobile, A knife with
unusual blood stains on it and The Note. On our way back to the police station
we examined the finger prints and on the Note the finger prints matched her
Mothers and the Knife and the Mobile both had unusual fingerprints on them that
matched the fingers of a man named John Lewd who was seen last week in a gang
with the exact same Knife that we are holding now.
Little Scarlett has not been reported dead yet but we are
still unsure where she is now. We have tracked down the gang in the Estate car
park but Little Scarlett is not there. We have a feeling she has ran away to a
safe place.
The Gang are being questioned at this moment about Little
Scarlett and are denying that they know her. More on the case soon , PC Pickett
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ReplyDeleteKPI: C2c Write scripts to improve dialogue with a clear purpose A
+ Lots of vocabulary showing understanding of role and context.
T Develop plot, explaining more clearly and in detail what happens next (To Little Scarlett, to other characters?)
L Spot and correct at least 3 caoital letters that should be lower-case (in purple)