Then I dreamed that I ran downstairs and had just time to
hide myself when you, Mr. Fox, came in dragging a young lady by the hair. And
the sunlight glittered on her diamond ring as she clutched the tapestry where I
lay hidden, and you drew your sword, and cut off the poor lady's hand." Then Mr. Fox fixed Lady Mary in his stony gaze and his smile broadened just a little as he repeated, in whispering voice that could scarcely be heard: "But it is not so, dear heart, and it was not so, and God forbid it should be so!" Then Lady Mary stepped closer to him, and the smile left her face, and her voice rang as she cried:
"But it is so, and it was so,
Here's hand and ring I have to show."
And with that she pulled out the poor dead hand with the glittering ring from her skirts and pointed it straight at Mr. Fox ...Less…
“My darling, my darling, I would never do that to anyone”
“But you did I saw it; I saw the
whole thing!”
Mr fox had to contain his anger,
then he could let it all out on the day of the marriage.
“Then I walked past the well
created tapestries and came across a room.”” I turned the door handle and the
door creaked … I opened it slowly with my eyes closed shut. I opened my eyes
and there was a room full of dead women all in white wedding gowns, some with
no heads some with no arms some without a body…. “
Mr fox was getting very aggravated
very quickly but knew he had to hold it in ... What if his plan didn’t work?
but Mary is stupid. Or is she?
“I still want to marry you, don’t
get me wrong but it’s just that I didn’t think you were that type of person.
from what I’ve heard from my friends and what I’ve seen I am not at all happy”
Mr Fox said in an aggravated but
calm tone “My darling don’t be stupid . they were killed by someone else...”
“WHAT ABOUT THE GRAVESTONES WITH
ALL OF YOUR FAMILYS AND OLD WIVES NAMES ON THEN?”
Mr Fox looked suspicious and knew
all of it was true ... but kept it to himself
The next day was the wedding day.
she sat up in her bead feeling anxious and feeling like this was the last day
of her life. But she still got dressed into her skin tight ,silky white dress. She
thought .. What am I getting myself into ?
At this time Mr fox as preparing
his knifes all set up in a stand at his bed.
The
Plan
·
Marry her
·
Get her money
·
DO THE DEED
He was SO excited
for the moment when he could put the knife right through her soft neck
“Another one to
my collection shah” Shouted Mr Fox.
As they walked
down the aisle he smiled at her … grimly. She was so happy that she had finally
found a man but and evil one. After the wedding they went back to Mr Foxes castle.
This was his time. Lady Mary fell asleep …He took a knife out of his draw,
dirty with old clotted blood surrounding it from the last victim …. His Mum.
WARNING: GRUSOME
Within 7
seconds he slit her throat. As the blood came spouting out he laughed. He had
done it. After she was completely dead he hung her from a rope Shot her 4 times
and quartered her. He felt great. She was chucked in a ready to go grave and
covered with thick wet mud. Lady Mary was GONE.
Lots of detail and effort here, Megan, but please think what amkes sense - you skip to a plan suddenly without explaining. Is this some writing of his that she finds, or what? You are also not clear that the scene starts AT THE WEDDING, so they can't get married the next day!
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